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הבלוג חבר בטבעות:
 
12/2007

פרק שני D:


They went to the place she wrote

Ofek: she's not here, let's go.

Michel: we need to get in to the forest

They went to the forest and….

Rona screamed…

They saw Ana on a tree. Dead.

Michel cried.

Rona: I hope it's a prank Michel!!

Michel: if it's a prank, why the hell am I cry???

Ofek: Michel, you always wanted to be an actor…

Michel: it's not a prank, I swear!

Rona: ok, where did you write it?

Michel: in my computer I got it from my uncoil he sad I shouldn't write bed things.

            I never think that what he means.

Rona: ok… you need to throw it out!

Michel: yeah…

                               - - - DAY AFTER- - -

Rona: you throw it?

Michel: yeah (right)

Rona: Good…

                             - - - IN THE NIGHT- - -

Michel writing in the computer:

It was a dark night…

Rona went out side…

She knows it's dangerous but she don't care…

Not anymore, she hates her life.

She wants to end them…

She took a knife and went out side, thro the window.

She stands near to her house door, cut her throat.

One second before she dies,

She rings the bell of her house that her parents will see her.

They went out side to see who ringing,

They saw Rona, Blood and a letter.

On the letter, it was bold letters:

"I Had Enough! I'm Sorry, I Love You"

They start to cry…

                         - - - THE OTHER DAY- - -

Nadav: did you herd what happened to Rona?

Michel: Hah?

To Be Continue

התגיבו?

בבקשה? >:

נכתב על ידי The Story Maker , 15/12/2007 19:12  
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תגובה אחרונה של יוצרת יצירות XD ב-27/12/2008 13:06
 



אני ממש מקורית D: פרק ראשון לסיפור שלי.


טוב, אז.. כאן יהיה לי סיפור בהמשכים אבל.. אם אתם לא יודעים אנגלית זאת בעיה...

הסיפור הוא רק באנגלית, טוב אז.. היה הפרק הראשון


That Was A Cold Night

What Is She Doing There Again?

No One Know, She Never Tell

Just Going There, And Coming Back Before The Sunrise.

But Not This Time, She Went Outside But She Never Came Back

                        - - - THAT DAY- - -

Rona: Michel, are you coming tonight?

Michel: Yeah, like I`m going to miss it.

Rona laughed.

                     - - - IN THE NIGHT- - -

Michel, Rona, Nadav and Ofek went to their place.

Ofek: Where is Ana? She always comes…

Rona: I don`t know, I didn`t ask her, I thought she`ll be here.

Nadav: Don`t worry maybe she`s sick…

Ofek: yeah, you right.

Rona: Michel, What`s wrong?

Michel: nothing, just that… never mind…

Rona: OK Michel, Tonight is your time to tell a story, do you have on?

Michel: actually I do!

                         - - - THE STORY- - -

It was a normal day, at list that what she thought…

Ana waked up. Did her regular things, went to the school.

She almost came but a gay, in black grabbed her hand.

She wanted to scream but he put he`s hand on her mouth.

He pulled her in to he`s car and drove to the park, went in to the forest and then BAM!

He shot her in the head. But no one was there! She was all alone, dead.

The teachers don’t know, her friends don`t know, her parents don`t know.

Only the killer knows, at list for now.

In the night she never came to the place she used to come.

Rona: Michel, stop the story!

Michel: why?

Rona: It`s not funny to make a story only because she`s not here.

Michel: well… want to hear something creepy?

Rona: yeah…

Michel: I wrote this last night.

Ofek: Yeah Right…

Michel: ho you don`t believe me?

Michel takes a piece of paper from her bag and giving to Ofek.

Ofek start to read the first sentence out loud "It was a normal day, at list that what she thought…" and say: so you rote it in the class today because Ana Never showed up, big dill.

Michel: read the date…

Ofek: November 6 2007…

Nadav: It was yester day

Michel: I know… well… you don`t really think it happened, Right?

Rona: well I don`t want to believe but I`m not sure…

Michel: want to find out?

Ofek: we can`t…

Nadav: why not?

Ofek: she never says the name of the park.

Michel takes a pen from her bag and said: give me the paper!

Ofek gave her the paper and Michel wrote on the paper something.

Michel: if it`s what happened it will be in this park.

They went to the place she wrote

Ofek: she`s not here, let`s go.

Michel: we need to get in to the forest

They went to the forest and….

To Be Continue

?התגיבו

נכתב על ידי The Story Maker , 12/12/2007 19:58  
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תגובה אחרונה של The Story Maker ב-15/12/2007 19:10
 





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