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הינה השיר

בבלוג השני הוא מופיע בעברית-

http://israblog.co.il/blogread.asp?blog=387871

i'm tired

hasn't left much strenth

i'm only 16 years old

but i have been through a lot

i can't find myself

i'm so confused and so un comprehension

i found an old key

into the cracks on the roud

i hoped this will help me to survive

everyone arond me is a liar

i live in the world of liars

my best frined

who has to keep me secrets

is telling them to a strange people

and telling even mor lies

so i revange her

throug her secret

who that hidden

but the feeling is not so good

it's doesn't help me much

i so angry

i so desperate

and so confused

it can be

that my place is not here

but in a different world

but which?

i'm tiret from searching after this

the posibility that is be left from me

it's to continue to survive

the stars

the moon

and the key that was found

will not help me at all

to survive in this world

apparently i will have to stay aline forever

the luck doesn't want to shine on me a littel bit

and inside the drakness

i feel the destruction already

loss of love

the result - is a broken heart

loss of frinedship

the result - is cold loneliness

לקח לי שעה  וחצי לרשום את זה אבל שיהיה

מקווה שתגיבווו

עוד יומיים מתחילה ת'קורס

בהצלחה לי..^^